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Abeyance: Audition by =Calicard:iconCalicard:

Categories Flash > Animations

©2009 =Calicard
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ANY PROBLEMS, GLITCHES, SYNC ISSUES, ETC. PLEASE LET ME KNOW

IT'S DONE.

I've been going at this thing for a while.

I hope you enjoy it!

I tried a lot of new things for this. And that's the whole point of joining OCTs: to better yourself. Learn new things. Meet people.

Obviously some parts aren't the best thing ever, but I dont care because I tried new things, and most importantly, I got everything done. Nothing was cut, no audio wasnt used.

Big thanks to Sam Haft for voicing EVERYTHING. He is amazing.

There was an issue with the syncing before, and it got near a whole second off sync near the end. I fixed it, at least I think I did, so if there are any problems, PLEASE let me know.

Any critiques, comments, suggestions of what to add, are all welcome, and in fact encouraged.

It's finally done, so here you are! And let me know!

:iconclockhat-productions: Sands of Abeyance

All art, animation, and characters (C)Toxic Comix

Critiques


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*Pikmaniak Oct 20, 2009, 11:51:25 PM
All I have to say is wow. This Flash was excellently executed to say the least. Everything ran exceptionally well, and it looked great overall. Honestly, I have no complaints, or criticism to give. I look forward to possibly fighting you, and maybe even teaming up if I make it in as well. Redhead's story looks very interesting, and I really do hope to see more. There's no doubt in my mind that you'll get on the roster. That reminds me, I better get my own audition going ! Well, Good luck, and keep up the excellent work ! Hope to see you in the OCT Roster ! ~Pikamniak
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~the-lagz Sep 1, 2009, 2:22:43 PM
pretty awesome dude keep up the good work :D

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~Omegapants Sep 1, 2009, 2:30:33 PM
Oh man, this is looking great man! Amazing voice acting! Can't wait to see more! :D
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Mood: Wow! ~elothemelo Sep 1, 2009, 2:34:09 PM
Very well done - the voices were especially great :)

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~CaptainWii Sep 1, 2009, 2:38:14 PM
COOL.

Anywho. Critique.


WHAT NEEDS WORK:
While the script was good, the Nazi-Harrison-story writer in me just says that it needed work. It seemed that it could've had some more depth to it, like a bit more than Red just happening upon the stranger and getting swiftly introduced to the OCT.

And, no arguments to Sam's amazing voice acting, but it's dangerous to have one VA for about 10 different roles. I understand that you were short on VA's (Thanks to me) and that Sam can do HUNDREDS of voices, but it was apparent that everyone sounded the same.

It's an inconvenient truth of VA's. Some like Sam or The Skark can do tons of voices, but when you have them voicing too many characters at once, it starts to become less believable. Sam did a great job differentiating his roles, but you have be careful to enamor someone's work to the extent that It's the only thing you want.

But enough criticism.

WHAT WAS COOL:
The story for this was great. I liked it. FBF was good. Really. You're getting a lot better.

My own opinions aside, the scripting was actually really good. You've gotten a lot better since Ebon Spire.

The character's expressions and reactions were great. Red's voicing and animation fit together perfectly.

All in all. Great job. Can't wait to see more. :D

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*TEZZLE Sep 1, 2009, 2:43:41 PM
Ho jeez! ALL those voices done by the same guy!? I'm impressed. Well if he ever wants his workload lightened, I'd gladly audition for any future roles.

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=Solomen Sep 1, 2009, 2:46:26 PM
"Who am I? Where am I? Why do I keep flipping myself off :O_o:"
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~kurokage311 Sep 1, 2009, 3:03:36 PM
awsome!

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~Pipe182motaS Sep 1, 2009, 3:11:53 PM
dood, totally amazing!!

AWESOME!!
you have reached an amazing level
great animation

i love it :highfive:

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=BeamTheFox Sep 1, 2009, 3:15:31 PM
Wow... that was quite impressive.

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~Shieldman Sep 1, 2009, 4:02:34 PM
Whoa, nice! You've got a great backstory for Red, I can tell.

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